
`My Narrative
Once upon a time, there was a naughty boy named Yahiko. He was a lonely boy with no friends. This boy lived in a village with one million other people. The village never stopped raining. Yahiko’s dream and goal was to bring peace to this ninja world. Yahiko always begged his parents to take him to a professional fighting club so his dream could happen. His parents found a fighting club and so he was accepted. The first day that he went, he found two friends which were named Nagato and Konan. These two people was his first friends. His teacher was Jiraiya and he was a good fighter and he taught them how to control their ninja powers.
After a few weeks, they heard an explosion. The explosion was from the great ninja war. Jiraiya left his students and went to help defeat the villains. Yahiko, Nagato and Konan went home. When Yahiko returned home, he found his parents on the ground with blood all over them. Yahiko screamed and he got really angry. He found the people that killed his parents. They were eating their food. Yahiko unlocked his special eyes called Rinnengan. After the great ninja war, Yahiko was poor and had no food. He couldn’t even find his friends.
Yahiko just kept on walking. After walking two kilometres, he found a lost dog that was really hungry. He kept on walking and the dog followed. They walked for miles in the rain. After walking another mile, he fell down. Someone was walking towards him. He got scared and screamed. Then he saw Konan with a loaf of bread. He halved the bread and gave one half to his dog. “Eat this slowly” Yahiko said to the dog. Konan walked off and so Yahiko and the dog followed. They ended up in Nagato’s hideout. Yahiko saw a lot of food. He asked Nagato “What are you doing with all this food? and How did you get it?.” Nagato replied “We are orphans and we have to steal food to survive. If you are not going to help us, you better get out now.” Yahiko said “Okay. I will help you.”
Years went by and there was still no peace. They met their teacher again. Yahiko asked Jiraiya”Why isn’t there peace in this world?” “As we live in this cursed ninja world, there will be no peace.” Jiraiya said. Yahiko replied “Then I will break that curse. I will bring peace to this ninja world.”
Ten years went by and Yahiko is 35 years old. He was ready to bring peace to this world. Then out of nowhere someone had a knife ready to kill Yahiko. He was a person that had knowledge on how to bring peace to this ninja world. Yahiko heard the noise of the footsteps getting closer to him. He was ready to do his special power. As soon as he got close enough, Yahiko turned around and did his special power. The person was unconscious. Yahiko picked him up and took him to the hideout. When he woke up, he found out he was chained to the wall. Yahiko walked by the person and asked him “What is your name?” He replied “Sarutobi.” Yahiko asked him another question “Do you know how to bring peace to this Ninja world?” Sarutobi said “Yes” in a deep voice. Yahiko shouted “Tell me please. Tell me.” Sarutobi replied “Okay.” Just when Sarutobi was about to tell him...
Yahiko woke up and somehow he knew how to bring peace. He knew that if he fought every villian and killed them, no one will will need to fight again. So he went on his journey to the dark groups hideout where all the villains were. He took people with him to help him fight the strong villains. They were named: Kisame who is a puppet master (Someone who controls puppets as his weapon), Sasori who carries a big sword as his weapon and Zoro who uses three swords when he is fighting.
Eventually they arrived to the hideout. The group was looking at Yahiko and his three partners. One of the members of the Dark group said “We were expecting you.” Yahiko didn’t reply. Yahiko was facing 5 opponents so he started the battle with a Rasengan (Energy Ball). 1 of them died and so it was four versus four. Sasori was versing a swordsman like himself. His name was Itachi. He was a very challenging opponent so Sasori did his special attack called: Hunting Prey. This attack cuts through his intestines allowing him to die quickly without any pain.
Zoro was versing a fire style user. His opponents name was Tobi. Zoro held one sword on each hand and the other sword on his mouth. Zoro started the fight with an attack named Fast Hunting Cheetah. That made his opponent really tired. Zoro ended the fight with an attack named 10,000 years of pain. This attack enabled him to use as much energy as he wants. He put all of his energy into one of his swords and stabs his heart. “BOOM”. When all the energy inserted his heart, it exploded.
Kisame faced a water style user named Tobirama. Tobirama started the fight with an attack jutsu (Jutsu is technique in Japanese) called water style, water dragon jutsu. Kisame dodged it with his weak and unused puppets. Then Kisame when close to him and did an attack technique called 100 punches. He did this technique with his legendary puppets. Tobirama died with a lot of pain and his last words are “ I shall never let you arghhh.” Kisame laughed and said “Keep dreaming.”
Then it was the final battle between Yahiko and Orochimaru. Orochimaru was the leader of the group. He used snakes when he battles. His tongue was slimy and it was very long. Orochimaru summoned a snake named Manda. Yahiko summoned a huge frog named Gamatatsu and there was a battle with the snake and the frog. Yahiko did a fire technique with his frog. The frog put a lot of oil on his tongue and Yahiko blew out fire from his mouth to the frogs tongue to make a big fire. The fire reached Orochimaru and his snake. The snake died and Orochimaru tried to run away but Yahiko told his frog to chase him and crush him. So Gamatatsu the frog started to chase Orochimaru. Orochimaru got crushed and there was a lot of peace in the ninja world.
...The End...
Hi Addnan,
ReplyDeleteYour narrative is really long and detailed. I like the ending how he brought peace to the ninja world.
Keep up the great work
From Teagan